An
inch of snow fell in the early morning
blurring your edges, softening the
painful cracks
blurring your edges, softening the
painful cracks
in the dry snow around you
now you are even more beautiful.
An
inch of snow fell
again early this morning
blurring your sharp edges,
softening
all the painful
cracks in the dry
snow around you, and now
you are even more
beautiful.
Cast your vote. A or B? (You don't have to give reasons, but you can if you want.)
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