12 December 2013

The Snow Angel (Day 3)



An
inch of snow fell in the early morning
blurring your edges, softening the
painful cracks 
in the dry snow around you
now you are even more beautiful.



An
inch of             snow fell
again  early  this  morning
blurring your sharp edges,
softening 
all the painful
cracks in the dry
snow around you, and now
you are                  even more
beautiful.



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